3rd grade writers on a poetry walk. |
Group noticings recorded in my little writer's notebook. |
Second draft of the poem with additional ideas from the students. |
3rd grade writers on a poetry walk. |
Group noticings recorded in my little writer's notebook. |
Second draft of the poem with additional ideas from the students. |
What a fun way to get students into creating poetry! Poetry by group shows them how easily they can write a poem too. Good job 3rd graders!
ReplyDeleteI love how you show all the different ways they've created poetic lines in the list, & they came up with some astounding ones! It must have been a grand adventure-that walk. They look so thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea. I love their descriptions of ordinary things--the bird's nest tucked up high, the curious onlookers, etc.
ReplyDeleteThird grade is such a fun age--still so excited about school, following rules. I can just see them on their way down the hall...
Lovely! I love thinking about poetry in this way too -- it is lurking everywhere, we just have to be on the lookout. I find the best poem-finders are the youngest writers.
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What a creative way of writing a school poem. I love how the students noticed the little things that happen in a school on a daily basis. Fun!
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet and touching. The list, the list is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThe description of them walking and observing is so powerful. I can picture it now...and will dream of my 5th graders doing this so well someday!
ReplyDeleteThat picture is of a place I want to be- amongst a community of thoughtful poets! I can see the engagement in their expressions.
ReplyDeleteThe comments added on the sides add a lot to the "picture" created by the poem. I hope you read all your comments to your students.
ReplyDeleteYour third graders did a wonderful job. It must make you smile to see your students so engaged.
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