Going on a Poetry Walk

Poetry hides everywhere. One of my favorite things to do with young poets is to take them on a poetry walk. Prior to our walk, I explain the rules: no talking, stick together, and write what you notice in your little notebook. As we walk inside and outside the school, we pretend we are invisible. We listen, watch, hear, touch, and notice. It is especially fun when another teacher or student tries to talk to one of the poetry walkers. They typically just look at them, smile, and shake their head. The rule is "no talking" and for the most part the kids stick to it. After we return from our walk, we head over to the meeting area. Often times, poets continue to write their noticings in silence. As a group, we create a list of these noticings. This list becomes the first draft of our poem. On my own, I consolidate the list and create a second draft of our poem. The next day, the students read the second draft and talk about what sticks with them, what patterns they see, and ideas about how to make the list look and sound poemy.

3rd grade writers on a poetry walk.


Group noticings recorded in my little writer's notebook.

Second draft of the poem with additional ideas from the students.


10 comments:

  1. What a fun way to get students into creating poetry! Poetry by group shows them how easily they can write a poem too. Good job 3rd graders!

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  2. I love how you show all the different ways they've created poetic lines in the list, & they came up with some astounding ones! It must have been a grand adventure-that walk. They look so thoughtful.

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  3. What a great idea. I love their descriptions of ordinary things--the bird's nest tucked up high, the curious onlookers, etc.

    Third grade is such a fun age--still so excited about school, following rules. I can just see them on their way down the hall...

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  4. Lovely! I love thinking about poetry in this way too -- it is lurking everywhere, we just have to be on the lookout. I find the best poem-finders are the youngest writers.
    Ruth

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  5. What a creative way of writing a school poem. I love how the students noticed the little things that happen in a school on a daily basis. Fun!

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  6. This is so sweet and touching. The list, the list is wonderful!

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  7. The description of them walking and observing is so powerful. I can picture it now...and will dream of my 5th graders doing this so well someday!

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  8. That picture is of a place I want to be- amongst a community of thoughtful poets! I can see the engagement in their expressions.

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  9. The comments added on the sides add a lot to the "picture" created by the poem. I hope you read all your comments to your students.

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  10. Your third graders did a wonderful job. It must make you smile to see your students so engaged.

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